Thomas Pal Assignment three feedback
Initial thoughts from this feedback, I think are fair and echo some of what I had originally planned out. My choice of black and white had been supported by the assignment. Areas, where I can enhance this assignment prior to submission for assessment, can be tidied up in the coming months.
- Introduction to my work
- tie in how I come to the idea
- tie in the research through trial and error
- produce the zine that was mentioned
- use of other media formats that went well
- ideas and research should be interwoven into the assignment write up
- don’t drift from the introduction write up into how I took the images
Overall I think this had been a strong assignment with how the images have come out. The way I have used my eyes to draw the viewer in has worked. I feel pleased with this outcome. Still some areas to tidy and consolidate in a little rework edit.
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Strengths |
Areas for development |
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Strong skill in establishing as structure within which the images are held and understood |
With any introduction to new work edit it down so that you allocate most of the word count to explain the creative aims and objectives of the work |
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Well resolved images that create an stimulating interplay between you and the situation of Covid-19 |
You have some work to build your confidence at expressing what it is you feel and understand about an other artist’s work so pay particular attention when reading ore theoretical texts that link to images to help build this skill |
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Good and effective manipulation of software to achieve the collages |
Part Two Context and Narrative BA HONS in Photography OCA 