Looking back now, I should have waited and thought about this assignment before submitting my draft. With both the feedback and the essay, I now see, I’ve not made the connection with the pictures or managed to construct any form of argument.
What I thought I would have received was an essay with red pen all over it, which is what I’ve sort of done now (pencil not pen).
It needs a total scrub and rewriting from the beginning; I can see how the introduction starts and how I can place in a lived personal experience through the writing. If I can find a previous image that McCullin has taken of the theatre I can use this to illustrate the practices of Rephotography.
Part Two Context and Narrative BA HONS in Photography OCA 