20200210-Ass 1-Student Feedback

After some time I’ve finally received my assignment 1 feedback. Is it what I was expecting to read. I think yes. The initial brief is pretty open, the help from the discord group was just to get on with the assignment so that your tutor can get a feel of how you shoot and write.

I’d think from this I’m going in the right direction, it’s always helpful when constructive criticism is given and how I can progress from this. Always going forward and hopefully not backwards. As I’ve said in the previous exercises I find the learning curve itself a challenge both in both the mental side and defiantly the academic side. Writing has never been my strong point. I wasn’t very keen nor was my attendance during my teenage years at school. I’m now on that adult learning curve where I hope I’m learning all the time.

thomas-pal-assignment-one-feedback (3)

Points to work on

• Add more to my introduction work
• Research the idea both putting pen to paper
• Change of language into a more critical analyst approach
• Keep learning